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The morning breeze blows through my yellowish curtains,
as my sleepy eyes adjusting to the ray of sun.
I could hear some blue jays playing never-ending tunes,
I love them tunes but my dizziness takes over them.

The morning winter welcomes me with its coldness,
I forgot to close the window again last night.
I could see two small footprints on my maroon carpet,
somebody must had been in my room last night or it was only me.

I got myself up and walk slowly to my open-window,
I couldn't take my eyes off of those black eyes, white owl.
For the first time, I let off my guard and let him see through my soul,
I am not afraid for this might be my last time.

My second winter with my "new" heart,
I put my left hand closer to my chest just to feel my heartbeat.
My second winter with my "heavy" heart,
I put my green blanket on, trying to warm myself.

I saw her again last night,
Yet, I couldn't recall whether she was in my room or in my dream.
I could feel her soft blowing through my hair,
she whispered something.

It's been two nights in a row,
I dream about her.
It's been two mornings in a row,
I wake up with my heart as if its trying to skip its beat.

I could not remember what it's like to be old me,
yet, the child in me is still there somewhere deep down.
I could not forget what it's like when you're around,
yet, I have never seen you.

or you just wont let me.
This story is inspired from : en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baby_Fae
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TRexyBusiness Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's sad about the baby, but I like this poem, too.
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Aheng711 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah, it was really sad and I was surprised by that baby story. Thank you very much for spending your time to read this Hug 
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TRexyBusiness Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't know such things existed!  Aren't those thing supposed to be unethical?
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Aheng711 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah me too, i was really surprised! But I also felt sad about the baby.
Yeah, it was unethical but at that time they had  no other choice. They did that only to buy time because they were still waiting for a suitable donor. In the end the baby died anyway because they could not find organ transplant from human :(
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TRexyBusiness Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, very saddening and heartbreaking.  
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Aheng711 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
T_T
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